Big Sean is an excellent rapper from the city of Detroit. In
the past he has produced several song that have reached the top ten song
according to iTunes. Big Sean is 24-year-old male rapper that has had much
success in the music industry. After signing with Kanye West’s record company
in 2007, Big Sean became an artist working his way up to the top. Then in 2008,
Big signed with Def Jam Records. It wasn’t until 2011 when Big Sean dropped the
album “Finally Famous”, that Sean became famous. He received three hit single
from this album alone, it was his ticket for fame. He has since become known
world wide, and working on new hit singles. His most recent was single was
called “Mercy”, where he calibrated with Kayne, Pusha T, and 2 Chainz. This
song was released, and that same week it reached iTunes top ten because it was
an amazing song. According to Big Sean’s website, his recent activity has been
dealing with kids and problem of attendance in Detroit schools. Back when Sean was in high school he ended
with a 3.7 GPA at Waldorf high school. So he recently has been visiting schools
with high attendance rates in Detroit to reward them for their hard work. This to me shows how generous Sean is in
giving back to the city that made him into wheat he is today. You don’t see
this in many rappers today; they in turn give shout out to this hometown but
never give back.
Like most rappers Sean started exposing his music to the
world through the free music industry. Many older Citizens of the Untied States
dislike this industry for they blame it for the economic struggles. Unlike the
older population, the younger population enjoys this industry for there is no
costs that come with music. Me being part of the younger generations, I enjoy
this industry for it is a way to find good new music for young artists. Some of
Sean’s first mix tapes in the free music industry were “Uknowbigsean” and
“Finally Famous”. These tapes are in my opinion some his best work that he ever
created for it what started his career as a rapper and he has been good ever
since these tapes. He then went on to create “ Finally Famous Vol. 3” which I
think is his best work he has created to this point. The reason I like it so
much is because it has the most significance to me. It tells listeners about how
coming up is hard but when you’re at the top that giving back it the most
important thing you can do. As I sated
before Big Sean’s Most recent work has been “Mercy”, and let me tell you this
song was so good that in the first week it grabbed so much attention it hit
number one the iTunes charts. Since then big has talked about coming out with
more calibrations with “Good Music” over the 2012 summer. So to all you Big
Sean’s Fans watch out for new music in the summer of 2012.
(Word Count 520)
Five areas for focused correction:
ReplyDelete1. Look out for comical misspellings. Examples: The Untied States; Sean is in giving back to the city that made him into wheat he is today.
2. You seem to have problems with omitting articles such as "the", "a", and "an". Example: "Big Sean is 24-year-old male rapper that has had much success in the music industry." You write like Borat talks when you omit articles.
3. Lose "in my opinion". It's your blog. Of course it's your opinion.
4. Pluralization is a MAJOR issue in your writing. Example: " He received three hit single from this album alone." Pluralization goes hand in hand with the article problem. These types of things are common with people learning English, but nothing about you indicates you should have similar issues. You don't speak this way; why write in this fashion?
5. Watch out for the malaprop! Example: "His most recent was single was called “Mercy”, where he calibrated with Kayne, Pusha T, and 2 Chainz." You mean cooperated or, more likely, collaborated. Calibrate means to gauge, mark or correlate readings. Collaborate means literally to "labor together".